高分作文標(biāo)志?
1:是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;
2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);
3、用詞是否多樣,準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;?
4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;?
5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。
寫(xiě)作常用方法?
適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀(guān)的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
善于使用插入語(yǔ),比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 ?如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說(shuō): Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, ?people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper,approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)